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Submitted: June 13, 2008
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Just me playing around again. I like where this is going, but it just doesn't seem complete. As with Sliced Designs, I feel that there isn't enough content on the right side. Any suggestions?

Everything by me, except for the camcorder icon which was borrowed from ~MugenB16's fabulous Front Row skin.
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It is very nice, I like the colors you use for the header, I would like to see those some colors in the content as well.

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I quite like it.

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Thanks!

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Mmm, I was having a time working them in somewhere. I did try "services" but it didn't quite look right.

I think I need some very vivid photos or graphics on the right that give some colour and contrast, but are also illustrative of the content.

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Right now I can see a few things...

Reflection on "Services" is too strong, also the Photoshop Icon is so huge that it becomes a focal point.

The header and the type treatment look fairly good though, so I'd stick with those.

It is a little off kilter, If you go with vivid photos on one side have some kind of colorful counterbalance on the other.

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You lost me after describing something as "fabulous". Furthermore, for all the anti-homophobes out there, it's not a gay joke i just think fabulous is a fuckin stupid word.

Yeh anyway...cool

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Coming from a guy who doesn't even spell the words he uses right.

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maybe you could use a crafty js script to change the color of each letter in the headers.

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Where does it even say the word fabulous?

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