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Submitted: February 16, 2008
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Resolution: 512×768
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Something I've been fooling around with.

What's in it:
.ico file - 256x256 vista compatible
.psd file - 512x512 for your modding pleasure (READ LICENSE)

First stab at a photo realistic illustration, so please critique.
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~djh:icondjh: Feb 16, 2008, 11:29:51 PM
The screen area looks nice, it's got a great matt finish to it.

A few suggestions:

The highlight on the base looks off, it gives it the appearance of being convex, rather than having a nice "L" curve to it. The shadow from the monitor would create more of a solid line to display the difference.

Also, the highlight that is on the lip of the screen is a touch too strong.

Keep in mind the highlight direction, and where a shadow would drop down from, and you should be set.

Not trying to drill you, but when I see "advanced critique" I go for it. Art classes and all, beh!

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=chalkley3:iconchalkley3: Feb 17, 2008, 1:06:58 AM
Thanks for the advice. I was going to fix the stand, but when I made it I did it in a weird way, and I wasn't really going to sit around and spend half an hour trying to fix the gradient in a way that doesn't make it look stranger than it did before.

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~Edonidas:iconEdonidas: Feb 17, 2008, 1:46:40 AM
Looks a lot like my monitor, so I like it!
=chalkley3:iconchalkley3: Feb 17, 2008, 4:35:03 AM
Cinema display?

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~djh:icondjh: Feb 17, 2008, 10:06:48 AM
Haha, I understand that. I've been in that kind of situation before. At least you're working on this kind of stuff, I'm still to lazy to get things going :D

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=chalkley3:iconchalkley3: Feb 18, 2008, 1:24:07 AM
Nice. I'm getting the syncmaster 226bw as soon as I can scrape together a couple more hundred dollars. Pretty similar to the one you've got, but with that silver strip on the bottom.

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~Edonidas:iconEdonidas: Feb 19, 2008, 2:56:39 AM
Good luck with that, I hope you get one that uses the S panel.
~luckeyguy:iconluckeyguy: May 3, 2008, 9:29:07 PM
I modded it a little!
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